hi everybody,
actually I need your help because I have an examination in writing description coposition in english , and what I want of you is to correct me because it's your mother language
here is the composition
As long as I live , I will never forget the high-school experience , because I had suffered a lot of its pressure.
It is unbelieveable how this experience had affected my life , I had to wake up very early in the morning to revise any thing before going to school and when I return I had to study very hard in order to achieve my abition.
Now , after graduating from the high-school I had reaped the benefits of my hard work and I got great marks in all the subjects: english , mathematics , chemistry , biology , history....
In my opinion , the period that follows the high-school is more beautifull than the high-school period itself , but only if you work very hard in high-school.
and please answer me very fast because i want to know my level in english , and please be crucial with me , and focus everything.
