I can agree. I flaw in this design is it does not show the curvature of space and time. Instead, you can look at like this; you have at first a perfectly flat dining room table with a cloth over it. You draw perfectly straight lines crisscrossing like a graph. (as described in my previous post) Now, in order to show the curvature of space and time you can take the cloth off of the table and throw it randomly on the floor. This imitates space because the lines should theoretically be a perfect graph, but when you throw in forces and energy, it clumps up and there are more lines in some places and less in others.
The Elegant Universe Written by Brian Greene... Good book I would (and probably antimatter) recommend it.