my blog

[dragonstar57]

what do you guys think of my blog.

this thread is for telling me how to improve my blog.

thank you for your help and your constructive comments.

[CaptainPanic]

It looks like you write it in a hurry. I suggest you read your own blog posts a number of times, and that you make sure that there are at least no spelling, grammar or punctuation errors in it. You should also try to improve the structure of the text.

 

In general, I struggle to understand what you want to tell me. That's partially because of the (lack of) structure in the sentences and (lack of) paragraphs, and partially because of a multitude of spelling, grammar and punctuation errors. The sentences don't start with a capital letter, and the sentences are difficult to read. The order in which you put your words confuses me. For example, the 2nd blog post starts with a sentence that I don't really understand even after reading it twice... And most importantly, I don't have a clue what you want to tell me.

 

Personally, when I write a blog (it's not world-class, but I think it's better than yours), I probably read it 5 times before I leave it... I suggest you do the same. Also, I read it at least once after posting it (in the blog format, not in the editing box). There is an edit button if you find a mistake after you posted it.

 

Also, you can look at some popular blogs - and study the structure in the paragraphs.

Edited February 1, 2011 by CaptainPanic