Zarnaxus Posted April 21, 2011 Share Posted April 21, 2011 The Universe expands at an increasing rate. I observe the night and the stars that shine. I notice how various, complex, and great, And wonder how more there are than mine. With star and planet in sync like clocks, How alike are we to them, how same? The forces governing the large, cosmic rocks Are akin to the forces which give us fame. Could our actions or even our complex behavior Be nothing more than an impending reaction? Does life itself require a grandiose savior, Or is it a simple human misconception? For the matter responsible for even our flaws, Are objectively known to follow universal laws. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rktpro Posted April 21, 2011 Share Posted April 21, 2011 abab Rhyme. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemur Posted April 21, 2011 Share Posted April 21, 2011 why did you write this poem? (just wondering - no implicit commentary or judgement meant) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keelanz Posted April 21, 2011 Share Posted April 21, 2011 one and many pound and a penny i like your poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ladeira Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 so cute I'd place it on my wall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marat Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 How erudite that it's in the form of a classic, Shakespearian sonnet! But those eye rhymes, like 'reaction' going with 'misconception,' will have me waking up tonight in a cold sweat. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyMcC Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 There was a young man from Midwest, Who wanted to get off his chest, Thoughts very profound, About laws very sound, That govern both motion and rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Borden Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 This is a sonnet correct? Very cool Shakespeare poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zarnaxus Posted April 28, 2011 Author Share Posted April 28, 2011 Yes, it is a shakespearian sonnet. I wrote it for my English class hehe, but I had fun doing so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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